Sunday, May 4, 2014

Trying to Get Back Home*, By Savannah Gray



One day there were three men. Once was named John. One was named Jordan, and one was named Nathan. Where they lived was an island to see their mom.

They had to go back to their home up in the mountains. They brought a ship there and they went off to sea. 

On  their way they saw something that looked like a new home to live in and it had a perfect spot to put their flag, but it wasn't a land….it was a whale!

They hurried and climbed back on their boat and sailed away as fast as they can.

John saw something. He said, “I see a wave. We’ve got to hurry and go past it.”
They sailed away as fast as they could, again.

“Yea, cave!” said Nathan. But right when they were almost in, “A shark!”
And then they sailed away even faster.

Right when they were sooooooooooooooooo far away from the shark Jordan saw, “Their house!”
They sailed as fast as they actually could. (But we’re almost done with this story.)

They saw a wall. But before anyone could say it first, Jordan, Nathan, and John said it at the same time.

Right where they were there up, popped an ice cube and it looked just like a ramp. And Nathan went as far back as he could and he went speedy quick and jumped over the wall with their boat and paddled back home.


The End

*Verbatim 

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